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2012四级写作网络课堂十大必背范文
王江涛
1、网络游戏
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Games. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)现在有些大学生沉迷于网络游戏，家长和学校对此忧心忡忡，
2)但有人认为网络游戏并非一无是处，
3)你的看法。
Online Games
As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. A great many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self-discipline are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents.
However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly.
From my point of view, online games are a wonderful entertainment if you play them in a reasonable way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once. Yet if you have enough self-control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them.
2、考证热
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze on Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”，
2)产生这一现象的原因，
3)你的看法。
Certificate Craze on Campus
In recent years, to get a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear?
There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. To begin with, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Furthermore, diploma and certificates are still vital standards by which a good many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.
From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certificates blindly is
nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value.
3、节俭
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Extravagant Spending on College Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)很多大学生每月的花销越来越高，根本没有节俭的概念，
2)分析产生这一现象的原因，
3)我的看法。
Extravagant Spending on College Campus
According to a survey, in recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on the sharp rise. Many college students have no concept of thrift in their mind. They take it for granted that they spend money from their parents before they enter into the society. This extravagant spending is primarily caused by the following factors.
First of all, nowadays most of the students are the only children of their families. They are the apple in their family’s eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money. In addition, with the improvement of living standards, parents can afford higher expenditure of their children. Moreover, some students like to pursue fashion and trends, which tend to need more money. Finally, campus love is also a possible factor causing extravagant spending.
From my point of view, a college student, as a pure consumer, should learn to be thrifty. We should limit our expenditure on daily necessities but not buy whatever we want regardless of their prices. The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.
4、社会实践
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Social Practice of College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)各大学在假期都会组织学生参加各种社会实践活动，
2)这些活动给大学生带来了哪些好处，
3)参加社会实践活动应该注意些什么。
Social Practice of College Students
Nowadays a large number of universities encourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities. During the holidays, students in mounting numbers choose to be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike. It is obvious that social practice is playing an increasingly essential role in China’s college education.
Undoubtedly, college students have benefited a lot from social practice. Above all, they are provided with more opportunities to contact the real world outside campus. What is more, in social practice activities, students can apply their theoretical knowledge to the solution to the practical problems. So their practical skills are improved greatly. Besides, social practice helps strengthen students’ sense of social responsibility.
Considering the above-mentioned, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice. However, social practice may bring some problems. For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study. Hence, we should try to balance the relationship between social practice and study.
5、挫折
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline：
1)加强挫折教育十分重要，
2)举例说明你的观点，
3)为了加强挫折教育，我们应该······
Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College Students
It is universally acknowledged that college students should be guided correctly to face frustrations in life. Frustration is inevitable during our life, and frustration education should be carried out among colleges and universities. The truth of it is deep and profound.
A great many remarkable illustrations contribute to this argument. A case in point is that there are an increasing number of college students committing suicide each year when confronted with some kind of frustration. This is close to suggest that strengthening frustration education allows of no delay. As a matter of fact, it seems that successful people tend to be good at dealing with frustrations. Moreover, most of the students are often annoyed and discouraged by frustrations instead of drawing lessons.
Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that frustration education is essential to the college students. But what is worth noting is colleges should also provide psychological service for the students while giving frustration education. To conclude, college students should be guided in the right path when facing setbacks in life.
6、报考公务员
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Test for Civil Servants. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)近几年兴起了一股报考公务员的热潮，
2)分析产生这一现象的原因，
3)你的看法。
Test for Civil Servants
In recent years, there are people in expanding numbers who have participated in the test for civil servants. Millions of students choose civil servant as their most ideal occupation after graduation. And among them, the high-educated, like masters and doctors, take quite a large percentage. The craze in civil servant test has attracted widespread attention.
The following fundamental causes can account for this kind of craze. First and foremost, nowadays college students face great employment pressure. Civil servant, as one of the most stable professions in today’s China, becomes their preferable choice. Moreover, recently, the welfare and salary of civil servants have been improved greatly, which undoubtedly attracts many people. Last but not least, the high social position of civil servants is a crucial factor drawing many people to take part in the civil servant test.
In my opinion, this craze in civil servant test will continue in the following years. However, from the long run, it does not do good to the development of our nation. If most high quality talents gather in the government departments, it might lead to a waste of resources. Accordingly, both the individuals and the government should have a more objective recognition of the civil servant test craze.
7、电视选秀
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Attending TV PK Shows Does(or Does no) good to Young People. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)现在各种各样的电视选秀节目吸引了许多年轻人，【四级写作】
2)为了实现明星梦，一些年轻人甚至放弃了学业，
3)你的看法。
Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People
Nowadays, TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted a large number of adolescents. Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of winning their fame overnight. Some people argue that these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others assume that attending these shows does no good to the juvenile. As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion.
It should be admitted that some young people like Li Yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for teenagers. The following reasons can support my view. First and foremost, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost. Furthermore, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values. They cling to the idea that attending the PK shows is a shortcut to success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work. Finally, if the young fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance.
In a word, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to achieve success. I hold the opinion that young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows.
8、出国留学
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Studying Abroad. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1）目前很多中国学生出国留学，
2）出国留学的好处，
3）我的看法。
Nowadays, going abroad for studies is enjoying a striking popularity among adolescents. Importance should be attached to studying abroad.
There are a great many advantages of studying overseas. First and foremost, living and studying abroad offers students a different perspective of the world. On a university campus, international students are likely to encounter their counterparts from various countries and areas and are exposed to diverse ideas and values. What is more, overseas experience is the best opportunity for the real-life use of foreign languages. There is no better opportunity to improve second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken.
Generally peaking, it is my view that although going abroad is expensive and perhaps painful, the payoff is worthwhile. In the first place, in addition to knowledge, overseas students can gain precious experiences that those who stay at home will never have. Furthermore, overseas experience, frustrating and painful as it may be, is conducive to the growth of adolescents.
9、就业
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Jobs for Graduates. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、 大学生难找工作，
2、 原因很多，
3、 解决的办法。
Job hunting has always been a headache for college students. Though many graduates are employed right after graduation, some are not. Most serious of all, some still have no idea where to go working even a long time after graduation.
The reasons for this phenomenon are various. On the one hand, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the number of graduates was greater than the need in the market. On the other hand, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.
I reckon this problem can be solved if both colleges and students take measures. First, they should research the market and develop special skills to suit its need. Second, students’ attitude towards employment should be changed. They should go to small cities and country. There they can also give full play to their professional knowledge. In a word, if we pay much attention, the situation can be improved.
10、互联网
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Internet. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、 互联网使用的现状，
2、 大学生是否应该使用互联网，人们的看法不同，
3、 我的看法。
In recent years, people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet. As is known to all, it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line, either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work’s needs.
On the one hand, no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life. As a college student, I get on line every day to exchange information through e-mails with my net friends. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle.
Thus, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. After all，Internet is invented to enrich our life, and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain.
参 考 译 文
1.
作为现代电脑与网络的产物，在线游戏在大学生中间已经变得非常流行。很多学生喜欢来自于这些游戏的极大快乐与满足。但是我们看到，一些缺乏自律的学生太沉迷于这些游戏，以至于影响了他们的健康和学习成绩。这种现象已经在教师和家长中引起极大忧虑。
然而，有人认为在线游戏并不总是有害。它们可以训练年轻人对事物的快速反应能力。此外，它们可以激发年轻人的想象与对电脑的兴趣。更为重要的是，它确实给大学生带来快乐并极大地减轻他们的压力。
在我看来，如果你以适当的方式玩在线游戏，这是一种极好的娱乐。当它们太影响学习的时候，你最好立即放弃。然而如果你对他们有足够的自制，你当然可以从中获得真正的快乐并受益匪浅。
2.
四级写作十大必背范文
1、~网络游戏
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Games. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)现在有些大学生沉迷于网络游戏，家长和学校对此忧心忡忡，
2)但有人认为网络游戏并非一无是处，
3)你的看法。
Online Games
As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. A great many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self-discipline are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents.
However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly.
From my point of view, online games are a wonderful entertainment if college students play them in a reasonable way. When they interfere too much with their study, it is better for to give them up at once. Yet if youngsters have enough self-control over them, they can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them.
2、考证热
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze on Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”，
2)产生这一现象的原因，
3)你的看法。
Certificate Craze on Campus
In recent years, to get a certificate Why does this craze appear?
To begin with, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Furthermore, diploma and certificates are still vital standards by which a good many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.
From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certificates blindly is
nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value.
3、节俭
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Extravagant Spending on College Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)很多大学生每月的花销越来越高，根本没有节俭的概念，
2)分析产生这一现象的原因，
3)我的看法。
Extravagant Spending on College Campus
According to a survey, in recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on the sharp rise. Many college students have no concept of thrift in their mind. They take it for granted that they spend money from their parents before they enter into the society. This extravagant spending is primarily caused by the following factors.
First of all, nowadays most of the students are the only children of their families. They are the apple in their family’s eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money. In addition, with the improvement of living standards, parents can afford higher expenditure of their children. Moreover, some students like to pursue fashion and trends, which tend to need more money. Finally, campus love is also a possible factor causing extravagant spending.
From my point of view, a college student, as a pure consumer, should learn to be thrifty. We should limit our expenditure on daily necessities but not buy whatever we want regardless of their prices. The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.
4、社会实践
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Social Practice of College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)各大学在假期都会组织学生参加各种社会实践活动，
2)这些活动给大学生带来了哪些好处，
3)参加社会实践活动应该注意些什么。
Social Practice of College Students
Nowadays a large number of universities encourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities. During the holidays, students in mounting numbers choose to be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike. It is obvious that social practice is playing an increasingly essential role in China’s college education.
Undoubtedly, college students have benefited a lot from social practice. Above all, they are provided with more opportunities to contact the real world outside campus. What is more, in social practice activities, students can apply their theoretical knowledge to the solution to the practical problems. So their practical skills are improved greatly. Besides, social practice helps strengthen students’ sense of social responsibility.
Considering the above-mentioned, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice. However, social practice may bring some problems. For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study. Hence, we should try to balance the relationship between social practice and study.
5、挫折
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline：
1)加强挫折教育十分重要，
2)举例说明你的观点，
3)为了加强挫折教育，我们应该······
Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College Students
It is universally acknowledged that college students should be guided correctly to face frustrations in life. Frustration is inevitable during our life, and frustration education should be carried out among colleges and universities. The truth of it is deep and profound.
A great many remarkable illustrations contribute to this argument. A case in point is that there are an increasing number of college students committing suicide each year when confronted with some kind of frustration. This is close to suggest that strengthening frustration education allows of no delay. As a matter of fact, it seems that successful people tend to be good at dealing with frustrations. Moreover, most of the students are often annoyed and discouraged by frustrations instead of drawing lessons.
Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that frustration education is essential to the college students. But what is worth noting is colleges should also provide psychological service for the students while giving frustration education. To conclude, college students should be guided in the right path when facing setbacks in life.
6、报考公务员
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Test for Civil Servants. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)近几年兴起了一股报考公务员的热潮，
2)分析产生这一现象的原因，
3)你的看法。
Test for Civil Servants
In recent years, there are people in expanding numbers who have participated in the test for civil servants. Millions of students choose civil servant as their most ideal occupation after graduation. And among them, the high-educated, like masters and doctors, take quite a large percentage. The craze in civil servant test has attracted widespread attention.
The following fundamental causes can account for this kind of craze. First and foremost, nowadays college students face great employment pressure. Civil servant, as one of the most stable professions in today’s China, becomes their preferable choice. Moreover, recently, the welfare and salary of civil servants have been improved greatly, which undoubtedly attracts many people. Last but not least, the high social position of civil servants is a crucial factor drawing many people to take part in the civil servant test.
In my opinion, this craze in civil servant test will continue in the following years. However, from the long run, it does not do good to the development of our nation. If most high quality talents gather in the government departments, it might lead to a waste of resources. Accordingly, both the individuals and the government should have a more objective recognition of the civil servant test craze.
7、电视选秀
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Attending TV PK Shows Does(or Does no) good to Young People. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)现在各种各样的电视选秀节目吸引了许多年轻人，
2)为了实现明星梦，一些年轻人甚至放弃了学业，
3)你的看法。
Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People
Nowadays, TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted a large number of adolescents. Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of winning their fame overnight. Some people argue that these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others assume that attending these shows does no good to the juvenile. As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion.
It should be admitted that some young people like Li Yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for teenagers. The following reasons can support my view. First and foremost, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost. Furthermore, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values. They cling to the idea that attending the PK shows is a shortcut to success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work. Finally, if the young fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance.
In a word, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to achieve success. I hold the opinion that young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows.
8、出国留学
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Studying Abroad. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1）目前很多中国学生出国留学，
2）出国留学的好处，
3）我的看法。
Nowadays, going abroad for studies is enjoying a striking popularity among adolescents. Importance should be attached to studying abroad.
There are a great many advantages of studying overseas. First and foremost, living and studying abroad offers students a different perspective of the world. On a university campus, international students are likely to encounter their counterparts from various countries and areas and are exposed to diverse ideas and values. What is more, overseas experience is the best opportunity for the real-life use of foreign languages. There is no better opportunity to improve second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken.
Generally peaking, it is my view that although going abroad is expensive and perhaps painful, the payoff is worthwhile. In the first place, in addition to knowledge, overseas students can gain precious experiences that those who stay at home will never have. Furthermore, overseas experience, frustrating and painful as it may be, is conducive to the growth of adolescents.
9、就业
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Jobs for Graduates. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、 大学生难找工作，
2、 原因很多，
3、 解决的办法。
Job hunting has always been a headache for college students. Though many graduates are employed right after graduation, some are not. Most serious of all, some still have no idea where to go working even a long time after graduation.
The reasons for this phenomenon are various. On the one hand, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the number of graduates was greater than the need in the market. On the other hand, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.
I reckon this problem can be solved if both colleges and students take measures. First, they should research the market and develop special skills to suit its need. Second, students’ attitude towards employment should be changed. They should go to small cities and country. There they can also give full play to their professional knowledge. In a word, if we pay much attention, the situation can be improved.
10、互联网
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Internet. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、 互联网使用的现状，
2、 大学生是否应该使用互联网，人们的看法不同，
3、 我的看法。
In recent years, people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet. As is known to all, it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line, either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work’s needs.
On the one hand, no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life. As a college student, I get on line every day to exchange information through e-mails with my net friends. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle.【四级写作】
Thus, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. After all，Internet is invented to enrich our life, and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain.
参 考 译 文
1.
作为现代电脑与网络的产物，在线游戏在大学生中间已经变得非常流行。很多学生喜欢来自于这些游戏的极大快乐与满足。但是我们看到，一些缺乏自律的学生太沉迷于这些游戏，以至于影响了他们的健康和学习成绩。这种现象已经在教师和家长中引起极大忧虑。
然而，有人认为在线游戏并不总是有害。它们可以训练年轻人对事物的快速反应能力。此外，它们可以激发年轻人的想象与对电脑的兴趣。更为重要的是，它确实给大学生带来快乐并极大地减轻他们的压力。
在我看来，如果你以适当的方式玩在线游戏，这是一种极好的娱乐。当它们太影响学习的时候，你最好立即放弃。然而如果你对他们有足够的自制，你当然可以从中获得真正的快乐并受益匪浅。
2.
大学英语四级写作要求
1. 大纲要求
大学英语四级考试的第五部分是Guided Writing，共一题，考试时间30分钟，要求考生写出一篇100~120词的短文。试卷上可能给出题目，或规定情景，或给出段首句要求续写，或要求看图作文，或给出关键词，要求写出短文，或给出题目。要求能够正确表达思想，意义连贯，无重大语法错误。写作的内容包括日常生活和一般见识。
2. 评分原则
1) CET-4作文题采用总体评分的方法，阅卷老师就总的印象给出奖励分，而不是按语
言点的错误数目扣分。
2) 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评估。内容和语言是一个统一体。内容要求
思想表达正确，主题突出。内容是通过语言来表达，要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍，用词和造句是否清楚而确切地表达思想。
3. 评分标准
1) 本题满分为15分。
2) 阅卷标准共分五等：2分，5分，8分，11分，14分。各有标准样卷一份。
3) 阅卷者根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为
该分（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍差于该分数，则可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分）。但不得加或减0.5分。
4) 评分标准：
2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，多数为严重错误。 5分——基本切题。思想表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语法错误。
8分——基本切题。思想表达比较清楚，文字连贯，但有语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。
11分——切题。思想表达清楚，文字连贯，但有少量的语言错误。
14分——切题。思想表达清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误
（注）白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而思想无法表达，则给0分。特别优秀的作文也可评15分。
5） 字数不足者应酌情扣分：
累积字数在81~89之间，扣1分；累积字数在71~79之间，扣2分；累积字数在61~69之间，扣3分；累积字数在51~59之间，扣4分；累积字数在50以下，最多给5分。
6） 只写一段者：0~4分；只写两段者：0~9分。
4. 评分样卷及说明
[样卷1]
题目：Is Failure a Bad Thing?
要求：
I. 失败是常有的事。
II. 人们对失败有各种不同的态度。
III. 我对失败的态度。
1) 14分：切题。思想表达清楚，内容比较充实，文字通顺，句子结构多样，连贯性较好。
基本上无语言错误，但个别地方不够贴切。
Failure is a common thing in our daily life. As a student, we sometimes fail to get high scores in our examinations. When we play games we can’t avoid being beaten by the others.
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5) And there are times when we fail o do more satisfactory work. All these failures happen naturally and almost everyone of us has such experience. However there are different attitudes towards failure. Some people lose heart in failure, they think the world is at its end. Some people don’t take failure seriously, they just let it be, while some others learn much from failure and therefore see the light of hope through failure. In my opinion, what really counts is not failure itself. But what we think of failure and do after failure. As long as we don’t give up and believe in ourselves and in the meantime learn something from failure, we’ll certainly make our marks in the end. So I’m never afraid of failure, for I believe that failure is not a bad thing, “failure is the mother of success.” 11分：切题。思想表达清楚，文字连贯，但有少量的语言错误和用词不妥之处。 Failure is a thing that often happens. It is impossible to have no obstacles when people do something. Of they don’t prepare well or make some mistakes, people will fail. So everyone involved famous persons have experience of failure. However people have some different kinds of attitudes to failure. Some feel disappointed and won’t go on. But others regard failure as a good thing, they find out the reason why they have failed and do their best to get over the obstacles. So they success finally. Many Scientists stories can prove it. To tell the truth, I don’t like failure. But when I fail, I will not feel disappointed and stop working. Because failure isn’t a bad thing. I will learn something from failure and gain success. 8分：基本切题。思想表达比较清楚，文字比较连贯，但句子较单调，有一些语言错误，其中有几处的严重错误。 Failure is the thing which is always happen. Not passing an examination during one’s study is a failure. Not winning in a sports-meeting to a sportman is a failure. Not successing to finish an science experiment to a scientist is a failure. People have different views of the failure. Some people think that failure means to a mew begin. Some people will give up his plan because of the failure. Some people will get something new from the failure and do it again. I will regard it as a new start and do it again. Because failure is the thing which is always happen. If I give up every time I will never do anything. I believe that failure is not a bad thing. 5分——基本切题。但连贯性差，语言错误较多，且许多是严重错误，影响思想的表达。 All of us are often failure. When we do something, we can’t be sure about it. And we don’t know whether it will be failure or success. People have all kinds of thinking of failure. Somebody is angry, somebody is disappointed, somebody keeps silence and others try do it again. And so on, it is different from everyone. I’m often failure else. As soon as I am failure. I think over it in order to find the mistakes. “Failure is the mother of success.” So I do my best to do it again. “is failure a bad thing?” “no.” the answer is. 2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，不知所云。语言支离破碎，基本上找不到一个完整的句
子，标点符号及拼写错误比比皆是。
Is failure a bad thing, if we have it, to fact with it, or not? To us, failure is often thing, let us surposed, if someone who has never failed and do everything very easy, then, you see,
he isn’t a happy man. Everyone had failure, you can not image what kind of failure has touched to a success man.
To the failure, someone facts with it and try to make the failure into a encouragement thing and find why they falled and make up his mind to resolve the problume while, someone is give up what he had very done, ever dissapointment, he isn’t the great man. I know, live is include of failure and success, a really man will not run away from the failure, failure isn’t a bad think, failure is necessary if will fact with it for ever. I will success.
四级作文万模板
提纲式作文
1． 对立观点式
A．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？
B． 有人认为X 是坏事， 反对X，为什么？
C．我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。
There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2． 批驳观点式
A．一个错误观点。
B． 我不同意。
Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。（According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响）。 There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3． 社会问题（现象）式
A．一个社会问题或者现象。
B． 产生的原因
C．对社会和我们生活的影响
D． 如何杜绝。（如果是问题的话）
E． 前景的预测。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。（或者是一个例子）。
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面参照辩论式议论文的写法。
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated（表达） in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。
A dozen of measures are supposed t
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